Clay swirled his brush across the paper, filling in the sky behind the little red house he’d painted. Below, two stick figures with dark hair held the hands of the smaller figure. The one with bright yellow hair just like Clay’s. Mittens wound around his ankle as he dipped the brush into the water, then traded the blue paint for black.
His tongue poked out from between his teeth as he carefully drew a few more lines and added ears. “There, I put you in the picture too, Mittens. They promised you’d come home with us.”
The cat jumped onto the table and chirped, “mrrow”.
“Do you think they’ll like the picture, Mittens?” Clay whispered.
This time, the black cat dipped her paw in the mug of water in answer.
He looked at Mittens and gave her a tremulous smile. “Do you think they’ll like us?”
Please visit the flash fic group on Facebook and check out the links to the other authors’ flash fics! This week, Helena made me cry.
I look forward to seeing you next Monday!
You’re all killing me today.
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Mine was at least hopeful! Helena’s was just so sad.
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LOL I just wrote that I found some optimism in Helena’s and here I am shedding a tear over yours. Well done.
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I just read Helena’s.. Both of you are getting me teary.. 😊
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I feel like ours almost could have been about the same kid (if the cat had the same name). Although I hope Clay and Mittens ended up in a happier home than Helena’s characters!
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Aw, sweet–hopeful. But, still brought a tear to my eye. Now, I’m afraid to read Helena’s.
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